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Sunday, 17 August 2008 @ 3:10 pm
HELP GUYS! GUYS! CAN YOU GO READ MY STORY BLOG AND GIVE ME SUGGESTIONS FOR : 1. how to improve my one shot. 2. editing chapter 2 3. what the 4th main character in the darker truth should be like (erika), as well as how Arianna and "I" should progress in our relationship, or should i just fast forward in time and then incorporate a plot inside- abit like going forward and then telling the past in the future. cant remember the proper term. OH. EMBEDDED PLOT. I would like to clarify that Jamie IS supposed to be abit gay-ish to show that despite him being abit off in character, he appeals to girls. (especially gu niang!) oh ya. can you guys tell me how you feel when you read the one-shot? i want to see what message is portrays (grace says its weird :O i feel hopeless) I REALLY NEED YOUR SUPPORT. i cant do this alone. link: http://emotionally-bound.blogspot.com couldn't tomorrow possibly be a better day that today'-[xiiao] deathie Labels: chapter, darker truth, emotionally-bound |